Review of "If It Causes Me to Sin" by Jess Hanna

hannaI picked this short story up for free off of Amazon for my Kindle. It had an interesting premise as the mentally ill protagonist allows his faulty interpretation of Scripture to lead him to some drastic measures. Unfortunately, the story was ultimately unsatisfying. The back story is insufficient and the resolution is non existent. This is partly due to the medium, however, I firmly believe even a short story should have a beginning, middle, and end … and this little story seems to fall a little short. I would love to see the author expand it somewhat.

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